Thursday, February 23, 2023

Critiques and Script Writing

Today in class, me and a few of my peers bunched into groups to discuss our ideas for the video and to give critiques as to how to improve storylines or how to implement ideas. In this meeting, I learned that the Smile Room was well received and that instead of using masks in premiere which would prove to be difficult, I could use makeup. While I have little experience with makeup, I can learn how to use household materials to make convincing looking blood and how to cover up someone's mouth with makeup. As well as this, I was reminded to ask for permission to film at the dentistry. This is something I am currently doing. I messaged Le Orthodontics if I can film for non-profit purposes at the establishment.

After this, I got to writing the script for the Smile Room with new information to make a better script. 



The story follows a boy named Logan who goes to the dentist, of course, this interaction goes not like planned. The story embodies many people's fear for the dentist. In the next post, I will be writing the second script which will be my backup.

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